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The maps portray a plethora of development that occurred in Paradise Island a period of time.

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The maps portray a plethora of development that occurred in Paradise Island a period of time. Overall, it is clear from the map that paradise island has been transformed into a tourist destination with great facilities. It is evident from the maps that in the past the island had only one establishment named scientific research station which was accessed through a pier located on the west coast of the island. The beach was towards the north-west and a Natural spring was erected at the east close to the rocks appeared at the North East of the island. At present, the station was reconstructed to Hotel Complex with a swimming pool facing towards the north side. The pier is enlarged which helps the cruise ships visitors to access the island. In the middle, an open restaurant has been established with BBQ Area and a café is also setup near to Natural spring. A scenic lookout is arranged facing towards the rock in north-eastern side, a cycle path has been created encircling the island and swimming is permitted at the beach.
The maps portray a plethora of development that occurred in Paradise
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Island
a period of time.

Overall
, it is
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clear
from the map that paradise
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island
has
been transformed
into a tourist destination with great facilities.

It is evident from the maps that in the past the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
had
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
one establishment named scientific research station which
was accessed
through a pier located on the west coast of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
. The beach was towards the north-west and a Natural spring
was erected
at the east close to the rocks appeared at the North East of the island.

At present, the station
was reconstructed
to Hotel Complex with a swimming pool facing towards the north side. The pier
is enlarged
which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
the cruise ships visitors to access the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
. In the middle, an open restaurant has
been established
with BBQ Area and a café is
also
setup near to Natural spring. A scenic lookout
is arranged
facing towards the rock in north-eastern side, a cycle path has
been created
encircling the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
island
and swimming
is permitted
at the beach.
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IELTS academic The maps portray a plethora of development that occurred in Paradise Island a period of time.

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