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The illustrations demonstrate the value of one country’s exports in different groups in the year 2015 and 2016. The table depicts the ratio of alternations in every group of exports in the two years. Overall, it can be seen that the exports earnings show growth in both petroleum products and engineering goods from 2015 to 2016. On the other hand, the table experienced the value changes in the five exports as well as it is clear that there is decreased in gem and jewelry. According to what is shown, that petroleum products have almost similar earnings in 2015 and 2016 with a slight increase in 2016. besides that, the exports of engineering goods jumped slowly in 2016 to over 40 billion, the gem and jewelry illustrate dropped in 2016, over 40 billion in 2015 to under 44 billion. However, the other two categories which insignificant rise in the two years.
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earnings
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as well
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of engineering
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