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The bar chart illustrates, how many people are travelling to overseas in the year 1985 to 1995.

The bar chart illustrates, how many people are travelling to overseas in the year 1985 to 1995. Ya5d

The bar chart illustrates, how many people are travelling to overseas in the year 1985 to 1995. The line graph depicts the proportion of these tourists coming to australia in the same year. Overall, the japanese tourists travelling was increasing year by year and percentage of humans coming to australia is also increasing. As we can see from the illustration that, across 5million passengers are moving to various places in 85, which keeps on rising every year except in the year 1991. From approximately, 7million tourists in 1987 reaches as high as 12 millions in the span of 6 years. Finally it reached to 15million citizens in 1995 which is three times higher than that of decade earlier. The line graph shows, an exact of 2% japanese individuals migrated to australia and with a steady increase this figure wents to roughly of 5% in the 1988. As the ration declined in the year 89 and grew up for next successive 4years. Australia reached more than 6% in 1993 which is the highest and stoods up to an exact of 6% japanese travellers in 94.

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