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The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production. rBNk
The diagram in figure illustrates the steps of a process that is designed to autonomously produce energy at home without relying on external suppliers. The first step implies the need for organic material, or compost that is mixed with water in a relatively large tank. Fermentation will generate methane gas which is intubated into a wide storage and then a compressor. Such device will increase overall exiting preassure of methane while the gas is directed towards a combustion engine. Here, the pressurized gas is ignited and the deriving chemical energy will move specific devices which convert chemical energy into mechanical energy. The resulting energy is fundamental for the last phases of the process. In fact, mechanical energy will be used in a generator to produce electrical energy. Finally, electrical energy, the wanted byproduct of the entire process, is stored in a battery before being used for domestic reasons.
The diagram in figure illustrates the steps of a process that
is designed
to
autonomously
produce
energy
at home without relying on external suppliers.

The
first
step implies the need for organic material, or compost that
is mixed
with water in a
relatively
large tank. Fermentation will generate methane gas which is
intubated
into a wide storage and then a compressor. Such device will increase
overall
exiting
preassure
of methane while the gas
is directed
towards a combustion engine. Here, the pressurized gas
is ignited
and the deriving chemical
energy
will
move
specific devices which convert chemical
energy
into mechanical
energy
. The resulting
energy
is fundamental for the last phases of the process. In fact, mechanical
energy
will be
used
in a generator to produce electrical energy.

Finally
, electrical
energy
, the wanted byproduct of the entire process,
is stored
in a battery
before
being
used
for domestic reasons.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows a possible future means of home energy production.

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  American English
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