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This line graph illustrates the data of India’s turtle population of three specimens which are Green turtle, Olive Ridley turtle and Leatherback turtle between 1980 and 2012.

This line graph illustrates the data of India’s turtle population of three specimens which are Green turtle, Olive Ridley turtle and Leatherback turtle between 1980 and 2012. 85oKl
This line graph illustrates the data of India’s turtle population of three specimens which are Green turtle, Olive Ridley turtle and Leatherback turtle between 1980 and 2012. Overall, all species population seems modestly surge for 8 years until 1988’s, a slightly slips back happens then constantly this pattern of up and downwards. In 2014 number become steady again at around 110 turtles, shows marginal changed compared 1980 whereof merely 100 turtles. In term of each specimens, Olive Ridley turtles paraphrase steadily soar until 1996’s, approximately more or equal 30 additional turtles, Thus jump down to 130 on recent year. Leather back turtle’s line performs downwards from 1998’s, end up less than 60 where is the less of all. Green turtles info pictures quite similar to overall trend, start with repeated climb and fall and become consistent after 2000’s, small sink for 10 less turtles for summary.
This line graph illustrates the data of India’s
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turtle
population of three specimens which are Green
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turtle
, Olive
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Ridley
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turtle
and
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Leatherback
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between 1980 and 2012.

Overall
, all species population seems
modestly
surge for 8 years until 1988’s, a
slightly
slips back happens then
constantly
this pattern of up and downwards. In 2014 number become steady again at around 110
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turtles
,
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shows
marginal
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changed
compared 1980 whereof
merely
100 turtles.

In term of each
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specimens
, Olive
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Ridley
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paraphrase
steadily
soar until 1996’s, approximately more or equal 30 additional
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turtles
,
Thus
jump down to 130 on recent year. Leather back
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turtle’s
line performs downwards from 1998’s,
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end
up less than 60 where is
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the less of
all. Green
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turtles
info pictures quite similar to
overall
trend,
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start
with repeated climb and fall and become consistent after
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2000’s
,
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small
sink for 10
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less
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for summary.
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IELTS academic This line graph illustrates the data of India’s turtle population of three specimens which are Green turtle, Olive Ridley turtle and Leatherback turtle between 1980 and 2012.

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