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Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features XGYAw

This Bar chart shows the buying and drinking habits in a survey that has been made for five Australian cities for people who drink and buy coffee and tea. It is clear from the chart that people went to a cafe for coffee or tea has increased gradually in four weeks in all of the five cities. According to what is shown, fresh coffee has been bought in Sydney and Melbourne is approximately in the same range and it's more than 40 percent. While it is about 34 percent in both Brisbane and Adelaide. And between these ranges locate Hobart in a percentage of 37. While people who bought instant coffee are increased 10 % per month from 45% to 55% in the whole five cities. To sum up, we could say that going out to buy coffee preferred by Australian people more than buying fresh or instant coffee.

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people
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