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1.The diagram shows how raw materials are used to make plastic products. Summarise the diagram.

1. The diagram shows how raw materials are used to make plastic products. Summarise the diagram. GMXBL
This diagram shows the process that raw material is changed into finished plastic products. Overall, it can be seen that this process is made up of complicated steps and it takes a lot of time to make products. Firstly, raw material is transferred to the plant from oil refinery. Then it is put into oven, which heats it at high pressure in order to make long molecules of plastic. After that, plastic granules are passed into a machine called injected moulder, which soften the plastic and pushes it into mould. As a result, harden plastic is come out of mould and product are made. Putting product into box is followed by the process that staff checks the flaws of products. In the middle of this, unnecessary material is discarded. Finally, box putting products are moved to warehouse and stored.
This diagram
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shows
the process that raw material is
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changed
into finished
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plastic
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products
.
Overall
, it can be
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seen
that this process
is made
up of complicated steps and it takes
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a lot of
time to
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make
products.

Firstly
, raw material
is transferred
to the plant from oil refinery. Then it
is put
into oven, which heats it at high pressure in order to
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make
long molecules of
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plastic
. After that,
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plastic
granules
are passed
into a machine called injected
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moulder
, which soften the
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plastic
and pushes it into
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mould
.
As a result
, harden
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plastic
is
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come
out of
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mould
and
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product
are made
.

Putting
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product
into box
is followed
by the process that staff
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checks
the flaws of
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products
. In the middle of this, unnecessary material
is discarded
.
Finally
, box putting
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products
are
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moved
to warehouse and stored.
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IELTS academic 1. The diagram shows how raw materials are used to make plastic products. Summarise the diagram.

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3 paragraphs
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