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The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are manufactured. Summarise it

The diagram shows the process by which milk and related products are manufactured. Summarise it yG2RP

The diagram illustrates the process by which milk and related products are manufactured. The procedure mainly happens within three places that is farm, dairy and supermarket. Overall, the process begins from the farm where the cow gaze and end up in the supermarket moreover it is a step-by-step process. Initially, milk from the cow has been collected by milking machine twice a day and stored in refrigerators. After delivering milk to dairy by milk tankers daily the important stage begins. The milk undergoes pasteurization whereas by products such as cheese, cream butter are separated. Finally, the milk as well as related products are packed and delivered to shops and supermarkets where it can be sold.

The diagram illustrates the process by which You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 and related products are manufactured
. The procedure mainly
 happens within three places that is
 farm, dairy and supermarket.

Overall
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begins
 from the farm where the cow gaze and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 up in the supermarket moreover
 it is a step-by-step process.

Initially
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 from the cow has been collected
 by milking machine twice a day and stored in refrigerators. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 delivering You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 to dairy by You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 tankers daily the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 stage This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatescommences
begins
.

The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
 undergoes pasteurization whereas by products such as cheese, cream butter are separated
. Finally
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
as well
 as related products are packed
 and delivered to shops and supermarkets where it can be sold
. 