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This graph compares how much Americans spent to how much income they made in 2013, by age group. The data shows an overall rise and fall in both income and spending between young, middle-aged, and older Americans. Income rises and falls more sharply than spending. Those under 25 and over 75 actually spent slightly more than they earned. In contrast, between the ages of 25 and 64, Americans earned 10, 000 to 20, 000 dollars more than they spent. This difference shrinks in the 65-74 age group, where spending was just a few thousand dollars less. In terms of actual numbers, those under 25 or over 75 earned and spent around 30, 000 and 35, 000 dollars, respectively. 25-34 year-olds and 65-74 year-olds both earned in the 50, 000s and spent in the 40, 000s. In the middle, between ages 35 and 64, income was 70, 000-80, 000 dollars, and spending ranged from roughly 55 to 60 thousand.
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and spending between young, middle-aged, and older Americans.
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rises and falls more
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Those under 25 and over 75 actually
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of 25 and 64, Americans
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10, 000 to 20, 000
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more than they
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. This difference shrinks in the 65-74
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and
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around 30, 000 and 35, 000
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,
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. 25-34 year-olds and 65-74 year-olds both
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in the 50, 000s and
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in the 40, 000s. In the middle, between
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35 and 64,
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was 70, 000-80, 000
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, and spending ranged from roughly 55 to 60 thousand.
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