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The number of books read by boys and girls from 2009 to 2012

The number of books read by boys and girls from 2009 to 2012 2ljJk
The line graph indicates the number of library book at Starmouth school read by booys and girls from 2009 to 2012. In general, the lines show an upward trend for both gender from 2009 to 2011. In 2011, both lines equally hit the exact number of 100. However, after that, there was a gradual fall on boys' number of reading books. The blue line graph, wich shows girl, increased rapidly from just over 20 to 40 from 2009 to 2010 and then jumped to 80 over the next year. Comsequently, it kept rising significantly to 140 from 2011 to the present. At the same time in 2009, the number of books read by boys grew from around 50 to 80 in the following year. Moreover, there is a slight growth to 100 in 2011. But in 2011, as both lines met at 100, the number of books dropped only for boys to 80 in 2012.
The
line
graph indicates the
number
of library book at
Starmouth
school read by
booys
and girls from 2009 to 2012.

In general
, the
lines
show
an upward trend for both gender from 2009 to 2011. In 2011, both
lines
equally
hit the exact
number
of 100.
However
, after that, there was a gradual fall on boys'
number
of reading books.

The blue
line
graph,
wich
shows
girl, increased
rapidly
from
just
over 20 to 40 from 2009 to 2010 and then jumped to 80 over the
next
year.
Comsequently
, it
kept
rising
significantly
to 140 from 2011 to the present.

At the same time in 2009, the
number
of books read by boys grew from around 50 to 80 in the following year.
Moreover
, there is a slight growth to 100 in 2011.
But
in 2011, as both
lines
met at 100, the
number
of books dropped
only
for boys to 80 in 2012.
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