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This floor plant illustrates the expansion of colwick art center between 2005 and today.

This floor plant illustrates the expansion of colwick art center between 2005 and today. OlayN
This floor plant illustrates the expansion of colwick art center between 2005 and today. as it can be seen some huge changes were made in buildings and constructing new section. In the past, two galleries were located on the right-hand side that joined together and relocated on left-hand-side of the map. The old buildings were constructed as a concert hall. A huge building in the center of the map was used for the concert hall and cinema that today is demolished. central exhibition area and a new building for cinema are built on that location. Toilet building on the left side was moved to the opposite side, below the new concert hall and become smaller. A café is built between the new gallery and outdoor exhibition area. There was a snack bar in the north-west that completely destroyed and meeting room below it was separated into two building that replaced with snack bar. A new building is created between today cinema and meeting rooms that use as drama studio. wasteland in the bottom of the map became an outdoor exhibition area and performance area. A lot of trees are planted and several bench tables add to it.
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seen
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some
huge
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changes
were made
in
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buildings
and constructing
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new
section.

In the past, two galleries
were located
on the right-hand side that
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joined
together and relocated on
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left
-hand-side of the map. The
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old
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buildings
were constructed
as a concert hall. A huge
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building
in the center of the map was
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used
for the concert hall and cinema that
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today
is demolished
.
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central
exhibition
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area
and a
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new
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building
for cinema
are built
on that location. Toilet
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building
on the
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left
side was
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moved
to the opposite side, below the
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new
concert hall and become smaller.

A café
is built
between the
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new
gallery and outdoor exhibition
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area
. There was a snack bar in the north-west that completely
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destroyed
and meeting room below it
was separated
into two
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building
that replaced with snack bar. A
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new
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building
is created
between
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today
cinema and meeting rooms that
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use
as drama studio.

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wasteland
in the bottom of the map became an outdoor exhibition
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area
and performance
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area
.
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A lot of
trees
are planted
and several bench tables
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add
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IELTS academic This floor plant illustrates the expansion of colwick art center between 2005 and today.

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