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the graph show the number of arrests per year

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The given line graph depicts the figure for cases that utilize illegal drugs annually during the 15 years period from 1991 to 2005. From an overall perspective, there was an upward trend over the period surveyed. It is also noticeable that the quantity for cases on a year basis experienced a palpitations at the end of the period. In 1991, starting at exactly 10 cases per year, there was a moderate rise to over 20 cases for the next three years, followed by a continuation to go up sharply in 1995. Moreover, after settling at exactly 60 arrests during the period from 1995 to 1997, the number of cases witnessed a significant fall, going down from 1997 to 1999- a decrease of 33 arrests. After that, this figure experienced a slight recovery from 1999 to 2000. The difference in the number of cases in 2000 and 20001 amounted to 55 arrests, before the arrest’s data witnessed a slight oscillation with a decreasing tendency.
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line graph depicts the figure for cases that utilize illegal drugs
annually
during the 15 years period from 1991 to 2005.

From an
overall
perspective, there was an upward trend over the period surveyed. It is
also
noticeable that the quantity for cases on a
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year
basis experienced
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a palpitations
at the
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end
of the period.

In 1991, starting at exactly 10 cases per
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year
, there was a moderate rise to over 20 cases for the
next
three years, followed by a continuation to go up
sharply
in 1995.
Moreover
, after settling at exactly 60
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arrests
during the period from 1995 to 1997, the number of cases witnessed a significant fall, going down from 1997 to 1999- a decrease of 33
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arrests
. After that, this figure experienced a slight recovery from 1999 to 2000. The difference in the number of cases in 2000 and 20001 amounted to 55
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arrests
,
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before
the
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arrest’s
data witnessed a slight oscillation with a decreasing tendency.
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