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The graph shows the unemployment rate in UK and Japan from march 1993 to march 1999

The graph shows the unemployment rate in UK and Japan from march 1993 to march 1999 WEana
The line graph demonstrates the information in terms of percent about jobless people in United state and Japan from march 1993 to march 1999. It is evident, in march 1993, American initiated with it's dominaned value that was 7. 0%, than it followed a downward trend with some fluctuations. After two year, the value decreased and reached 5. 5%. However, in march 1997, the proportion of unemployed people in USA decline by 0. 5%. The lowest percentage of out of work force was observed in march 1990.
The line graph demonstrates the information in terms of percent about jobless
people
in United state and Japan from
march
1993 to
march
1999. It is evident, in
march
1993, American initiated with it's
dominaned
value that was 7. 0%,
than
it followed a downward trend with
some
fluctuations. After two year, the value decreased and reached 5. 5%.
However
, in
march
1997, the proportion of unemployed
people
in USA decline by 0. 5%. The lowest percentage of out of work force
was observed
in
march
1990.
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IELTS academic The graph shows the unemployment rate in UK and Japan from march 1993 to march 1999

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