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A diagram about the water supply in Australia at present and in the future.

A diagram about the water supply in Australia at present and in the future. 26NKx
A process chart is given, providing an information regarding the water supply in Australia at present and in future. Overall, it can be obvious that abundance of steps have been taken during the water supply in present as well as in future. According to the given data, it is evident that pure water is stored in Dam and then pure water has been transferred to a city which is used by three different activities, and this step is first step. Moreover, from city, storm water is directly sent to the river, and waste water is being sent for the water treatment plant that is second step. On the same way, waste water then sent to the river. Heading towards the future water supply in Australia, it can be seen that storage of pure water in the Dam is being used for the city purposes such as household, factories as well as shops. Furthermore, storm and waste water have been sent to water treatment plant. In addition, from water treatment plant pure water again sent to city amenities. At last, it is clear that no water will be released into the river as compared to the past.
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water
supply in Australia at present and
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in future
.
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steps
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been taken
during the
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water
supply in present
as well
as
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in future
.

According to the
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data, it is evident that
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pure
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water
is stored
in Dam and then
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pure
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water
has
been transferred
to a city which is
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used
by three
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different
activities, and this
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step
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, from city, storm
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water
is
directly
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sent
to the river, and waste
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water
is being
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sent
for the
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treatment plant
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second
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step
. On the same way, waste
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then
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sent
to the river.

Heading towards the future
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water
supply in Australia, it can be
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seen
that storage of
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pure
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water
in the Dam is being
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used
for the city purposes such as household, factories
as well
as shops.
Furthermore
, storm and waste
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water
have been
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treatment plant.
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treatment plant
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pure
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again
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sent
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At last, it is
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IELTS academic A diagram about the water supply in Australia at present and in the future.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
196 words
6.0
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