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The chart below shows the number of nutrients consumed in the USA from the morning tonight. Overall it's pretty clear that sugar is the most consumed material in snacks. While sodium is mostly time consumed in dinner, breakfast in saturated fat And sugar. We can see that there are some nutrients consumed equally at some times. For example, sodium is consumed equally by 14% in breakfast and snacks. we can also see that some different nutrients are consumed equally at the same time like saturated fat and sugar by 16% in breakfast. The chart also shows that the three nutrients are consumed most of the time at dinner and less than others at breakfast. In lunch, sodium consumed by 29%,
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consumed in the USA from the morning

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that sugar is the most
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material in snacks. While sodium is
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in dinner, breakfast in saturated
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And sugar.

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that there are
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nutrients
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by 14% in breakfast and snacks.
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saturated
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and sugar by 16% in breakfast.

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most of the
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at dinner and less than others at breakfast.

In lunch, sodium
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by 29%,
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