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the number of tourists going to a specific Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017

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The graph illustrates the number of tourists going to a specific Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. These visitors are categorized according to their accommodation preferences. Overall, the number of tourists showed an upward trend in the given time period. In the beginning, the number of visitors staying on the island was higher than those staying on cruise ships. However, the first choice of the tourists was to stay on cruise ships in the year at the end. The number of tourists staying on the island was about 0. 75 millions in 2010. Next year, this number remained the same. The number of tourists had increased gradually for the following 2 years. From 2013 to 2015, this number plateaued at almost 1. 5 millions. Subsequently, this number decreased in the next year. However, it reached the same number as it was two years ago in 2017. The number of visitors staying on cruise ships was approximately 0. 25 millions in 2010. In the next three years, it showed fluctuation. From 2013, the number rose gradually, and it passed the numbers of tourists staying on cruise ships in the year of 2016. At the end of the given period, the number of visitors staying on cruise ships was almost 2 millions.
The graph illustrates the
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going to a specific Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. These
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are categorized
according to their accommodation preferences.

Overall
, the
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showed
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time period. In the beginning, the
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of
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on the island was higher than those
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, the
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was to stay on
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in the
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end
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of
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on the island was about 0. 75
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in 2010.
Next
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, this
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remained the same. The
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of
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had increased
gradually
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plateaued at almost 1. 5
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Subsequently
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decreased in the
next
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as it was two years ago in 2017.

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was approximately 0. 25
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in 2010. In the
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fluctuation. From 2013, the
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rose
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of 2016. At the
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