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Diagram shows cycle of salmon life

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The diagram represents salmon’s life cycle. Salmon has 3 main states of life: ‘fry’, ‘smolt’, ‘adult salmon’. In general, salmon is born in upper river where it becomes fry. Then, it swims in lower river, where it grows and becomes smolt. After that, smolt swims into open ocean, where it becomes adult salmon. As it was said, salmon is born in upper river, where stream is generally slow. It is born from salmon eggs, which are typically laid near the small stones, close to lower part of stem of reeds. Fry lives between 5 to 6 months in this location. After that, fish goes to lower river, which has a lot faster stream speed. Fry grows there for approximately 4 years and becomes smolt. Next, smolt swims into open ocean, where it lives for 5 years, and finally becomes adult salmon. After fully growing up, adult salmon goes back to upper river to lay eggs and thus, cycle repeats itsel

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smolt
’, ‘adult salmon’.

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, salmon is born
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river
 where it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcometurn intogrow intodevelop into
becomes
 fry. Then, it swims in lower You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
, where it grows and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcometurn intogrow intodevelop into
becomes
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smolt
. After that, Possible spelling mistake found.moltsmelts molt
smolt
 swims into open ocean, where it You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcometurn intogrow intodevelop into
becomes
 adult salmon.

As it was said
, salmon is born
 in upper You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
, where stream is generally
 slow. It is born
 from salmon eggs, which are typically
 laid near the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 stones, close to lower part of stem of reeds. Fry This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
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between 5 to 6
 months in this location. After that, fish goes to lower You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
, which has a lot faster stream speed. Fry grows there for approximately 4 years and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcometurn intogrow intodevelop into
becomes
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smolt
. Next
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smolt
 swims into open ocean, where it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 for 5 years, and finally
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becomes
 adult salmon. After fully
 growing up, adult salmon goes back to upper You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtributaryestuarystream
river
 to lay eggs and thus
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