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This bar chart prrovides the information on number of visitors between years 2007 and 2012 to National Gallery, Victoria and Albert Museum and British Museum.

This bar chart prrovides the information on number of visitors between years 2007 and 2012 to National Gallery, Victoria and Albert Museum and British Museum. OMr27
This bar chart prrovides the information on number of visitors between years 2007 and 2012 to National Gallery, Victoria and Albert Museum and British Museum. Year 2012 had the highest number of visitors in comparision to Year 2009 which had the lowest number of visitors. Victoria and Albert Museum was the most popular museum during 2007 and 2008 with number of visitors close to 14 Million in both the years. Howvever its popularity fell during years 2009 and 2010 with number of visitors at 6 million during the year 2010. National Gallery had the lowest number of vistors during the year 2007 with 6 million visitors. It has become increasingly popular between the years 2007 and 2012 with number of visitors steadily increasing. It was the most popular museum during the year 2012 having 16 million vistors in that year. British Museum was the second most popular museum. It had about 12 million visitors during that year. However the number of visitors decreased during the years 2008 and 2008 with each year recording 6 million visitors. However, number of vistors started to increase during the years 2010 and 2012 with 2012 recording 14 million visitors. During that year, it was the second most popular museum behind National Gallery.
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IELTS academic This bar chart prrovides the information on number of visitors between years 2007 and 2012 to National Gallery, Victoria and Albert Museum and British Museum.

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