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This bar chart demonstrates visitors to several numbers art museums in a year. There are six art galleries within which the Louvre in France got the vast majority of visitors just under nine million in 2011 while, Russia had the least spectators at around three million. Indeed, there are slight differences between viewers of galleries in Spain, Korea, and Russia ( 3 and 3. 1 and 2. 9 million respectively). Moreover, Hermitage in Russia, Museo del Prado in Spain, and National Museum of Korea approximately had a half and a third of visitors to the Metropolitan and Louvre museum respectively. Additionally, British Museum is reported that it had roughly 6 million viewers the same as the Metropolitan Museum in the USA at about two-third of the Louvre. To sum up, the most prominent art gallery was the Louvre followed by metropolitan and British museums.

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