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The line graph depicts how sun energy used in the USA, china, Japan and Germany from 1995 to 2015.

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The line graph depicts how sun energy used in the USA, china, Japan and Germany from 1995 to 2015. Overall, the United States was the leading country that used solar energy. China was the last country that used this kind of energy, and it increased its use to be the second of all. In 1995, the USA use of solar energy was nearly 8000, and it increased to be 10000 in 2015. In 1995, China was using solar energy at approximately 2000, and it increased to reach just above 2000 in 2005. Then their use of this energy increased sharply to 6000 in 2010 and to just below 12000 in 2015. At the beginning of the recorded period, Japan used 6000 of solar energy, and it decreased to just below 4000 in the end of the shown period. In 1995, Germany was at above 2000, and then it fluctuated during the recorded years from 2000 to 2015.
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of the shown period. In 1995, Germany was at above 2000, and then it fluctuated during the recorded years from 2000 to 2015.
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