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The bar chart gives information about percentages of Computer ownership by five education level between 2002 and 2010. overall, People who had no high school or diploma reported lowest proportion among others while, Post graduate students reported highest in figure. The people who have not high school or diploma was around 12%, with high school the percentage significant rose almost 40% in 2002 whereas, uncompleted collage students was about 55% in the year of 2002. The proportion of bachelor degree holder and Postgraduate students had slightly difference at about 70% and 75%, respectively. In 2010, The Percentage of non high school or diploma is around 25% more than 2002 records further more about 68% in was high school graduate. The percentage of incomplete collage students and bachelor's degree holders had minimal difference about 3%. The topmost group who hold computer ownership was Postgraduate qualification with above 90%.
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IELTS academic percentage of Computer ownership by five eduction level between 2002 and 2010.

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