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The Two Maps Below Show Road Access To A City Hospital In 2007 And 2010

The Two Maps Below Show Road Access To A City Hospital In 2007 And 2010 VlQV3

The maps demonstrate the entrance of the City Hospital route in there years between 2007 and 2010. Overall, penetration of the City Hospital streets had been developed as well as constructed the new bus station, two roundabouts and common car par separately, which was not seen in 2007. It can be seen from the first period, the hospital path had three bus stops on the either side, was linked to the city hospital road and ring route. Moreover, the location of the vehicle parking lot for the employee and common situated east side of bus stops. In 2010, some effective changes could be seen. Initially, The east side of the hospital was built significantly for general car parking while the staff parking lot had been constructed east side of hospital path, however, the bus station situated opposite side of employee car park. Secondly, two roundabouts have been fabricated to the both ends of the hospital road. Lastly, three bus stops had been dismissed, but the public car park, two roundabouts, staff car park and bus station were built differently with the connection of Ring road and hospital road.

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Hospital
 route in Did you mean "their"?their
there
 years between 2007 and 2010.

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Hospital
 streets had been developed
as well
 as constructed the new bus station, two roundabouts and common You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 par separately
, which was not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in 2007.

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seen
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 period, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
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stops
 on the either side, was linked
 to the city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
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road
 and ring route. Moreover
, the location of the vehicle parking lot for the employee and common situated east side of bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
.

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some
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changes
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seen
. Initially
, The east side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
was built
significantly
 for general You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 parking while the staff parking lot had been constructed
 east side of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 path, however
, the bus station situated opposite side of employee You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 park. Secondly
, two roundabouts have been fabricated
 to the both ends of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
. Lastly
, three bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasesdiscontinues
stops
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, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the public You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 park, two roundabouts, staff You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 park and bus station were built
differently
 with the connection of Ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
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road
. 