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This bar chart illustrates the sales of book in various genre (young adult, classics, Mystery, Romance and Sci-Fi & Fantasy) between 2006 and 2010.

This bar chart illustrates the sales of book in various genre (young adult, classics, Mystery, Romance and Sci-Fi & Fantasy) between 2006 and 2010. pRBq3
This bar chart illustrates the sales of book in various genre (young adult, classics, Mystery, Romance and Sci-Fi & Fantasy) between 2006 and 2010. In term of popularity, The most preferable type is Romance with over 600000 sales each year and Mystery which made 400000 sales or more. Oppose to Sci-Fi&Fantasy books, they been sold for merely equal or under 20000 dollars per year, They might seem less picked except for 2010 goes to Classic. The data shows yearly trend, those two categories made highest sold over time whereas reached peak at 2007 for more than 100000 sold for Romance, Mystery books made over 80000 sold, While others type’s selling also slightly rising. On the other hand, in 2008, overall profits seem drop, Especially for the best selling one, Romance profits significantly fall down as well as the rest.
This bar chart illustrates the sales of book in various genre (young adult, classics, Mystery, Romance and Sci-Fi & Fantasy) between 2006 and 2010.

In term of popularity, The most preferable type is Romance with over 600000 sales each year and Mystery which made 400000 sales or more. Oppose to
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been
sold for
merely
equal or under 20000 dollars per year, They might seem less picked
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except for
2010 goes to Classic.

The data
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shows
yearly trend, those two categories made highest sold over time whereas reached peak at 2007 for more than 100000 sold for Romance, Mystery books made over 80000 sold, While others type’s selling
also
slightly
rising.
On the other hand
, in 2008,
overall
profits seem drop,
Especially
for the
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best selling
one, Romance profits
significantly
fall down
as well
as the rest.
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