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The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of growing GDP annually for Tunisia, Japan, Ecuador from 2007 to 2010. Overall, it is clear that the ratio of annual GDP growth for Tunisia and Ecuador fell over time, while it increased for Japan. However, Japan experienced the highest rate of GDP growth in 2010. In 2007, the proportion of annual GDP growth stood at just over 6% and about 3% for Tunisia and Ecuador respectively. Over the following two years, the former decreased rapidly to 3% and remained the same till the end. But, the latter went up drastically by 2% from 3% to 5% in 2008 and went down to 1% before showing a steady increase in 2010. By contrast, Japan's GDP growth rate started with 2%, increased rapidly to 4% in 2008, and then experienced a constant rise to finish with about 6. 5%
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of growing GDP
annually
for Tunisia, Japan, Ecuador from 2007 to 2010.
Overall
, it is
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clear
that the ratio of annual GDP
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growth
for Tunisia and Ecuador fell over time, while it increased for Japan.
However
, Japan experienced the highest rate of GDP
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growth
in 2010. In 2007, the proportion of annual GDP
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growth
stood at
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over 6% and about 3% for Tunisia and Ecuador
respectively
. Over the following two years, the former decreased
rapidly
to 3% and remained the same till the
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, the latter went up
drastically
by 2% from 3% to 5% in 2008 and went down to 1%
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before
showing a steady increase in 2010. By contrast, Japan's GDP
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growth
rate
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started
with 2%, increased
rapidly
to 4% in 2008, and then experienced a constant rise to finish with about 6. 5%
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.

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