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The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappering.

The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappering. Lr1nK
In the fast-paced world today, the habit of eating with family members is rapidly disappearing. There are several reasons for this. As a result, it leads to a breakdown in family life and morality between families. Nowadays, many families are becoming increasing accustomed to not eating together. There are two main reasons for this. Firstly, young people spend more time with their friends on social networks than their family members. As a result, children do not tolerate eating with family members. In addition, many parents are trying to advance their careers and make more money so they cannot focus on their children. The low level of cohabitation of families can lead to many negative outcomes. It is undeniable that when families sit around the same table it serves as the foundation of the family. During this time, family members can communicate with each other or share events that happen at work. In addition, from a child health perspective, home-cooked meals can provide a person with the energy they need. Some youngsters prefer to eat in restaurants. As a result, such a habit has a serious impact on their health. In conclusion, if such situations prevail and the relationship between families deteriorates, the result can be a loss of affection between family members.
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, the habit of eating with
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disappearing. There are several reasons for this. As a
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, it leads to a breakdown in
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family
life and morality between families.

Nowadays,
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are becoming increasing accustomed to not eating together. There are two main reasons for this.
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, young
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people
spend more time with their friends on social networks than their
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family
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members
. As a
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result
, children do not tolerate eating with
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family
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members
.
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parents are trying to advance their careers and
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make
more money
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they cannot focus on their children.

The low level of cohabitation of
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families
can lead to
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many
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negative
outcomes. It is undeniable that when
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families
sit around the same table it serves as the foundation of the
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family
. During this time,
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family
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members
can communicate with each other or share
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events
that happen at work.
In addition
, from a child health perspective, home-cooked meals can provide a person with the energy they need.
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Some
youngsters prefer to eat in restaurants. As a
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result
, such a habit has a serious impact on their health.

In conclusion
, if such situations prevail and the relationship between
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families
deteriorates, the
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result
can be a loss of affection between
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family
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members
.
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IELTS academic The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappering.

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6.5
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