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The diagram gives information about the generation of electricity in a hydroelectric power plant.

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The diagram gives information about the generation of electricity in a hydroelectric power plant. Overall, the process is divided into two stages which is day and night. During the day, water is moved from the high-level reservoir to the low-level reservoir and be pumped back at night. Initially, the dam is built to block the flow of water from the river, creating a high-level reservoir. During the day, the intake is opened and the water flows to generate electricity through a turbine. In the power station, the turbine is connected with a generator by a shaft so when the turbine spins it causes the generator to spin also. The power of the water flow makes the turbines spin, leading to the operation of the generator. Once operated, the generator will convert the energy from the turbines into electric energy. The electricity is provided to the national grid through the power lines. The water that goes through the turbines is stored in a low-level reservoir. At night, water from the low-level reservoir is pumped uphill through the reversible turbines to the high-level reservoir for tomorrow’s use.
The diagram gives information about the generation of electricity in a hydroelectric
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power
plant.

Overall
, the process
is divided
into two stages which is day and night. During the day,
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water
is
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moved
from the high-level
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reservoir
to the low-level
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reservoir
and
be pumped
back at night.

Initially
, the dam
is built
to block the flow of
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water
from the river, creating a high-level reservoir.

During the day, the intake
is opened
and the
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water
flows to generate electricity
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through
a
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turbine
. In the
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power
station, the
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turbine
is connected
with a generator by a shaft
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so
when the
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turbine
spins it causes the generator to spin
also
. The
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power
of the
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water
flow
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makes
the
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turbines
spin, leading to the operation of the generator. Once operated, the generator will convert the energy from the
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turbines
into electric energy. The electricity
is provided
to the national grid
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through
the
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power
lines.

The
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water
that goes
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through
the
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turbines
is stored
in a low-level
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reservoir
. At night,
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water
from the low-level
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reservoir
is pumped
uphill
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through
the reversible
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turbines
to the high-level
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reservoir
for tomorrow’s
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use
.

IELTS academic The diagram gives information about the generation of electricity in a hydroelectric power plant.

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185 words
6.0
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