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This bar chart gives an overview on Southland's main exports in different fields. It shows data about 2000 and 2018 and also makes projections for 2025.

This bar chart gives an overview on Southland's main exports in different fields. It shows data about 2000 and 2018 and also makes projections for 2025. X9mN
The primary exported three different products by southlands in the year 2000 and 2021 and the future predictions of export rates for 2025 is depicted by bar chart. Overall, it is clear from the chart that the vast popularity in export expenses was observed for international tourism and dairy products, whereas meat products contribution in exports will be comparatively least in the future. To begin with, there was a significant increase in exports of sothlands central exports, commencing from above 8 billion euros in 2002 to below 9 billion euros in 2021. Likewise, the estimation shows that the exports cost will witness a slight increase, with nearly 10 billions euros at the year 2025. However, meat products had experienced a downward trend, which begins with 6 billions euros and reached a low peak in 2021 which was around 5. 5 billion euros. It is forecast that this exports will likely to be drop minimally which accounts exactly 5 billion euros. Meanwhile, a large discrepancy ( 3 billions euros) was seen in figure of exports of dairy products between 2000 and 2021. While in 2025, it will have to fall down to about 9. 5 billion euros in level of exports costs.
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sothlands
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IELTS academic This bar chart gives an overview on Southland's main exports in different fields. It shows data about 2000 and 2018 and also makes projections for 2025.

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