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The diagram illustrates the process of producing ethanol fuel from corn.

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The diagram illustrates the process of producing ethanol fuel from corn. Overall, making ethanol fuel is complex and time consuming process which undergoes various stages. It is starting from corn and ending at transporting. As is observed from the diagram, firstly, corn is sent for storing. Secondly, it sent to milling. After, corns are cooked and water is added. Then, cooked corn goes through fermenting for 48 hours. Moving to the further description, corns are separated from in liquid and solid by product. Afterthat, ethanol is purified and sent to storing. In the last, ethanol is transported.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing
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ethanol
fuel from corn.

Overall
, making
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ethanol
fuel is complex and
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time consuming
process which undergoes various stages. It is starting from
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corn
and ending at transporting. As
is observed
from the diagram,
firstly
,
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corn
is
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sent
for storing.
Secondly
, it
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sent
to milling. After,
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corns
are cooked
and water is
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added
. Then, cooked
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corn
goes through fermenting for 48 hours.

Moving to the
further
description,
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corns
are separated
from in liquid and solid by product.
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Afterthat
,
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ethanol
is purified
and
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sent
to storing. In the last,
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ethanol
is transported
.

IELTS academic The diagram illustrates the process of producing ethanol fuel from corn.

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