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The given graph illustrates the number of visitors arriving at three major airports of New York, over a six-year period between 1995 and 2000.

The given graph illustrates the number of visitors arriving at three major airports of New York, over a six-year period between 1995 and 2000. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that a rising number of travellers is observed year on year. Moreover, the arrivals at John F. Kennedy witnessed an upward trend, whereas the figure regarding John F. Kennedy rose and fell consistently and that of Newark reached a plateau in the second half of the period. Looking at the details, John F. Kennedy visitors started at approximately 30 million, followed by some moderate fluctuations before reaching 45 million at the end of the period. Concerning La Guardia, the figure rose steadily until 1999 when it soared to 70 million, being the highest number of arrivals among all airports. As regards Newark, arrivals saw a considerable increase in the first three years and then leveled off until the end of the period in question. A final interesting point is that a growing number of people visited the three airports every year, which doubled in 2000 compared to the initial year.

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