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The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

The given pie chart illustrates and compares the proportion of Energy resources in energy industry of France in 1995 and 2005. Overall, over the 10 years there is no are no change in the main sources of energy. Coal and Gas energy sources takes the leading positions with the same figures in both years. The greatest change in the percentage was in petroleum energy. Between 1995 and 2005 gas production (and coal energy) slightly increased from 29, 63% to 30, 31%. Similarly, coal energy had accounted for 29, 80% and had a rise to30, 9 %. In 1995 Oil energy had approximately the same numbers with a gas and coal energy (with the result) of 29. 27 percent. In 2005 proportion of oil industry is declined to 19. 55 percent, however petroleum industry takes a solid 3rd place. In 1995 nuclear energy was the 4th most popular energy source and had 6. 40 percent of Energy industry of France. Other energies was the least popular source of energy with the figure of 4. 90 percent. Despite significant rice after 10 years nuclear and alternative sources of energy occupied the smallest share at 10. 10% and 9. 10% respectively.
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pie chart illustrates and compares the proportion of
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Energy
resources in
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energy
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industry
of France in 1995 and 2005.
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, over the 10 years there is no are no
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in the main
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sources
of
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energy
. Coal and Gas
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energy
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sources
takes the leading positions with the same figures in both years. The greatest
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in the percentage was in petroleum energy.

Between 1995 and 2005 gas production (and coal
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energy)
slightly
increased from 29, 63% to 30, 31%.
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, coal
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energy
had accounted for 29, 80% and had a rise to30, 9 %. In 1995 Oil
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energy
had approximately the same numbers with a gas and coal
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energy
(with the result) of 29. 27
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percent
. In 2005 proportion of oil
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industry
is declined
to 19. 55
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,
however
petroleum
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industry
takes a solid 3rd place.

In 1995 nuclear
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energy
was the 4th most popular
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energy
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source
and had 6. 40
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of
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industry
of France. Other
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was the least popular
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of
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energy
with the figure of 4. 90
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percent
. Despite significant rice after 10 years nuclear and alternative
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sources
of
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energy
occupied the smallest share at 10. 10% and 9. 10%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.

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