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Think that it is better to get advice from the cold rather than young people to what extent do you agree or disagree

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Quite a number of people believe that it is better to seek counsel from the elderly than the young generation. I too agree with this position that it is wiser to seek guidance from senior citizens. This essay will explain the substantive and experimential knowledge and improving the quality of life of individuals as benefits of obtaining instructions from elderly persons. To begin with, the wealth of experience, skills and capacities the elderly people have acquired put them in a better position to provide counsel. The older generation has gone through almost all the phases of life and has gained the wisdom to help them proffer instructions that are proven, rational, unbiased. systemic and pragmatic. More often than not, these pieces of advice can serve as a road map to assist the younger generation in making good decisions while navigating the path of life. To further buttressthis claim, Over the decade, it has been customary for children to consult their parents and for students to get guidance from the teacher, etcetera. This shows that the old have a great deal of useful counsel to offer the young. In addition, the counsels proffered by the older adults make the individual and the world a better place to be. Their shortcomings and challenges they encountered at certain time at certain times enlighten and sharpen an individual's sense of reasoning. Their experiences reinforce good values and good decisions making processes which are invaluable to life and the nation at large. To corroborate this, the all nations network conducted a survey in England and the results showed that countries that that had significant development were because they attached every young person to a senior citizen for life- long mentorship. This emphasis the effect of Counsel from elderly people. Tn concusion, the wealth of experience, life-long skills, and capacities as well as enlightened prospective improved individuals are pointers to why senior citizens are in a better position to give counsel than the young.
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people
believe that it is
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better
to seek counsel from the
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elderly
than the
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generation.
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with this position that it is wiser to seek guidance from senior citizens. This essay will
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the substantive and
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experimential
knowledge and improving the quality of
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life
of individuals as benefits of obtaining instructions from
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elderly
persons. To
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begin
with, the wealth of experience,
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skills
and capacities the
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elderly
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people
have acquired put them in a
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better
position to provide counsel. The older generation has gone through almost all the phases of
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life
and has gained the wisdom to
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help
them proffer instructions that
are proven
, rational, unbiased.
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systemic
and pragmatic. More
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often
than not, these pieces of advice can serve as a road map to assist the younger generation in making
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good
decisions while navigating the path of
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life
. To
further
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buttressthis
claim, Over the decade, it has been customary for children to consult their parents and for students to
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get
guidance from the teacher, etcetera. This
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shows
that the
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old
have a great deal of useful counsel to offer the
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young
.
In addition
, the counsels proffered by the older adults
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make
the individual and the world a
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better
place to be. Their shortcomings and challenges they encountered at certain time at certain times enlighten and sharpen an individual's sense of reasoning. Their experiences reinforce
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good
values and
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good
decisions making processes which are invaluable to
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life
and the nation at large. To corroborate this, the all nations network conducted a survey in England and the results
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showed
that countries that that had significant development were
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because
they attached every
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young
person to a senior citizen for
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life-
long mentorship. This emphasis the effect of Counsel from
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elderly
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people
. Tn
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concusion
, the wealth of experience, life-long
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skills
, and capacities
as well
as enlightened prospective
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improved
individuals are pointers to why senior citizens are in a
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better
position to give counsel than the
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young
.
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IELTS academic Think that it is better to get advice from the cold rather than young people

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