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these diagram show the proportion of the world's

these diagram show the proportion of the world's 11D3X

The two pie charts compare division of people, per percent, who lived in both villages and cities developed and developing countries in 1990, with It's prediction for 2025. Overall, pattern of life in developing countries is going to change significantly, whereas, It 's changes in developed one's are marginal. It can be clearly seen that the total propotion of people living in urban areas will be substantially more in 2025 than that in 1990, while, the proportion of world's rural population will have a considerable downward trend. The percentage of world's population lived in urban areas in 1990 accounted about two in five in both developed and developing countries, before It will be shoot up to around three out of five in 2025. In contrast, the total number of villagers go down from nearly three out of five in 1990 to about two in five in all of societies in 2025.

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people
, per percent, who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 in both villages and cities developed and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :Third World countrieslow-income countries
developing countries
 in 1990, Did you mean "with its prediction"?with its prediction
with It's prediction
 for 2025.

Overall
, pattern of life in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :Third World countrieslow-income countries
developing countries
 is going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
significantly
, whereas, It 's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in developed Did you mean the plural instead of the possessive?ones
one's
 are marginal.

It can be clearly
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seen
 that the total Possible spelling mistake found.promotionproportionpro potion
propotion
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 living in urban areas will be substantially
 more in 2025 than that in 1990, while, the proportion of world's rural population will have a considerable downward trend.

The percentage of world's population This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resided
lived
 in urban areas in 1990 accounted about two in five in both developed and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :Third World countrieslow-income countries
developing countries
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 It will be shoot up to around three out of five in 2025. In contrast
, the total number of villagers go down from nearly
 three out of five in 1990 to about two in five in Consider using "all societies" or "all of the societies".all societiesall of the societies
all of societies
 in 2025. 