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the map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (a,b and c) in a specific city.

the map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (a, b and c) in a specific city. KW8n3

The provided map shows three prospective places to build a mall in the future in a particular city. According to the given information, there are three suitable sites for the construction of the grocery mall in Pellington city. In this essay, we will discuss all of the possible places. Pellington city has around 120000 a population. Firstly, site a is situated in the area near the road which is a rush free area, as well as there is a park near it. So it seems like it could be a good option. Secondly, site b is placed on the outer side of the city where only a motorway present. Moving on to the last proposed place, site C is between the industrial zone and residential zone with a railway track near it. All in all, there are 3 suitable areas as we can predict a more suitable area will be A because it is more convenient and has more facilities rather than other areas.

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