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1. What are/is the first thing(s) that you are going to do regarding to this news? And why are you doing so?

1. What are/is the first thing(s) that you are going to do regarding to this news? And why are you doing so? lWQ31
The Suez Canal blockage has been receiving a great deal of media attention around the world due to its substantial impacts on global trade. There are several things I would like to do in this kind of circumstance. First, I would immediately contact the forwarder or shipping line to get detailed information. By constantly monitoring the current situation, it allows us to find a possible solution for the company in this incident. For example. Second, in order to avoid unexpected problems, it is necessary to map out a plan to ensure operations keep running as smoothly as possible when there is a disruption. Due to the Suez blockage, the lead time would be longer. I would plan adequate supplies for production and inform customers about any delays. If the company handles this situation effectively, it will always be trusted by customers, which is a worthy goal for any business.
The Suez Canal blockage has been receiving a great deal of media attention around the world due to its substantial impacts on global trade. There are several things I would like to do in this kind of circumstance.
First
, I would immediately contact the forwarder or shipping line to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
detailed information. By
constantly
monitoring the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
situation, it
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
allows
us to find a possible solution for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
in this incident.
For example
. Second, in order to avoid unexpected problems, it is necessary to map out a plan to ensure operations
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
running as
smoothly
as possible when there is a disruption. Due to the Suez blockage, the lead time would be longer. I would plan adequate supplies for production and inform customers about any delays. If the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
handles
this situation
effectively
, it will always
be trusted
by customers, which is a worthy goal for any business.
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IELTS academic 1. What are/is the first thing(s) that you are going to do regarding to this news? And why are you doing so?

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