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These charts illustrate the number of honey-bee hives and the weight of honey crops in the US in four decades between 1970 and 2010.

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These charts illustrate the number of honey-bee hives and the weight of honey crops in the US in four decades between 1970 and 2010. In 1970, the entire honey-bee hives were 4 million, then There was a slight boost in 1980, and It went up to around 4. 1 million, which also was the highest statistic in the period. Subsequently, during a gradual decline (from 3. 5 million in 1990 to approximately 2. 6 million in 2000), it reached about 1. 8 million, the lowest level in this timespan. During the same period, the honey production was 130. 000 tonnes in 1970, which was the highest amount, and in 1980, it dropped to 110. 000 tonnes. Unlike the downward trend, the crop rose to 120. 000 tonnes in 1990. However, in 2000, the amount began descending and fell to 110. 000 tonnes, then in 2010, it collapsed to the lowest amount, which was 70. 000 tonnes. Overall, although there had been a partial soar in the number of colonies in 1980, the honey output went down in that year. However, both charts similarly have a significant downtrend over the period; consequently, subjects could be correlate.
These charts illustrate the number of honey-bee hives and the weight of honey crops in the US in four decades between 1970 and 2010.

In 1970, the entire honey-bee hives were 4
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During the same period, the honey production was 130. 000 tonnes in 1970, which was the highest amount, and in 1980, it dropped to 110. 000 tonnes. Unlike the downward trend, the crop rose to 120. 000 tonnes in 1990.
However
, in 2000, the amount began descending and fell to 110. 000 tonnes, then in 2010, it collapsed to the lowest amount, which was 70. 000 tonnes.

Overall
, although there had been a partial soar in the number of colonies in 1980, the honey output went down in that year.
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, both charts
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have a significant downtrend over the period;
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, subjects could be
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