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The pie chart shows adult population in the u S A by race ethnicity according to a census in1997 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The pie chart shows adult population in the u S A by race ethnicity according to a census in1997 15bQ7
The chart presents the proportion of US Citizens based on their race category from 1990 to 2050. Overall, all group of races increased steadily over 60-year periods exclude white race and US’s citizens who have white color skin become the biggest population among all races. In year 1990 to 2000, the number of black, Hispanic, and other groups were slightly rose to 13%, 11%, and 4% accordingly. It is contrasted with white skin people were declined minimally just under one in twenty per cent. When it comes to 2050, the percentage of residents of US with white skin predicted downward trend with more than half per cent. In the other hand, upward trend will show in black, Hispanic, and other group with more than one in ten per cent and the amount of Hispanic race showed twice as much as other group, while other group showing the lowest proportion among all race in the US.
The chart presents the proportion of US Citizens based on their
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race
category from 1990 to 2050.

Overall
, all
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group
of
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races
increased
steadily
over 60-year periods exclude
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white
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race
and US’s citizens who have
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white
color skin become the biggest population among all races.

In year 1990 to 2000, the number of black, Hispanic, and
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other
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groups
were
slightly
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rose
to 13%, 11%, and 4%
accordingly
. It
is contrasted
with
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white
skin
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people
were declined
minimally
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under one in twenty per cent.

When it
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comes
to 2050, the percentage of residents of US with
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white
skin predicted downward trend with more than half per cent. In the
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other
hand, upward trend will
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show
in black, Hispanic, and
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other
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group
with more than one in ten per cent and the amount of Hispanic
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race
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showed
twice as much as
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other
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group
, while
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other
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showing the lowest proportion among all
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in the US.
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IELTS academic The pie chart shows adult population in the u S A by race ethnicity according to a census in1997

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6.5
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