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Thermal conductivity of material at 25 °C

Thermal conductivity of material at 25 °C PWWLE
The graph above shows the difference of thermal conductivity of the 6materials at 25 degree Celsius temperature. the highest thermal conductivity of acetone is shown in graph at 1600 W. The acetylene measures approximately 1550 thermal conductivity which is 2nd highest. Acetal has just below 1500 W thermal conductivity, that describes it as 3rd highest. In graph after acetylne provide information about air that has 2nd lowest 1425 W. The one who has the lowest conductivity is acrylic. It has roughly 1350. Take a general view, all of these 6 substances that has a wide range difference. It is noticeable that only two acetal and acetone has close to each other than 50 apart in their conductive material. The most conductive substancece and least conductive substance have a difference of 250 W.
The graph above
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the difference of thermal
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of the 6materials at 25 degree Celsius temperature.
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highest thermal
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of acetone
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in graph at 1600 W. The acetylene measures approximately 1550 thermal
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conductivity
which is 2nd highest.
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below 1500 W thermal
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, that
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it as 3rd highest. In graph after
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acetylne
provide information about air that has 2nd lowest 1425 W. The one who has the lowest
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conductivity
is acrylic. It has roughly 1350. Take a general view, all of these 6 substances that has a wide range difference. It is noticeable that
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two
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and acetone has close to each other than 50 apart in their conductive material. The most conductive
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and least conductive substance have a difference of 250 W.
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IELTS academic Thermal conductivity of material at 25 °C

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