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Instead of revealing truth, the mass media very often misguide prople.do you agree or disagree

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Media hold a powerful impact on the society. It is a fastest channel through which people get information about what is going on in nation as well as world wide. I agree with the statement to the some extent because some news are real and some are fack also so its depend on the people to believe or not. Every news channels are doing a business. They all wants to make profit and to be top on the TRP chart so they do not care about reality of the information. politicians have a strong hold on media so they control them and force them to spread wrong information for their political benefits. There are various way to spread news like news paper, journals, internet. Electronic way is the fastest way to spread news and reach out maximum people. Different apps like whatsapp, facebook, instagram, twitter are very popular and used by most people globally. However, some information are not release by the government for the national security reasons because if the information is leak in the public it can be misused by terrorists so people are not aware of that news. There are some restrictions on media by government. In conclusion, media should reveal that information which is true because every information has a impact on society.
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to believe or not. Every
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channels are doing a business. They all
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profit and to be top on the TRP chart
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they do not care about reality of the
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information
.
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politicians
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media
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they control them and force them to spread
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for their political benefits. There are
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like
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, journals, internet. Electronic way is the fastest way to spread
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and reach out maximum
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.
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are not release by the
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for the national security reasons
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if the
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is leak in the public it can
be misused
by terrorists
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people
are not aware of that
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news
. There are
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restrictions on
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media
by
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government
.
In conclusion
,
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should reveal that
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information
which is true
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