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The graph compares changes in the Oil Production Capacity in millions of barrels per day in six countries.

The graph compares changes in the Oil Production Capacity in millions of barrels per day in six countries. j88Pw
The bar chart provides information about oil production capacity over a period of 20 years between 1990 and 2010. This graph is based on countries which are located near Gulf. A glance at four indicators for Saudi Arabia reflects that country is the best producer for oil production every time. For instance, Saudi Arabia produced more than hefty 14 million Barrels in 2010. Iran is another producer which its the rate for oil production capacity stands at approximately 4 million Barrels in four selected years. Notwithstanding, Iraq had lower oil production than Iran before 2010, but it is anticipated that it will surpass Iran after 2010. This range of oil production capacity for Qatar is negligible and it can be clearly seen that oil production capacity for this country did not achieve 0. 5 million per day each year. It is noticeable that oil production capacity for these countries increase from 1990 to 2010. But there is an exception for Qatar that rate constant with a small fluctuation.
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the rate for
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stands at approximately 4 million Barrels in four selected years. Notwithstanding, Iraq had lower
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did not achieve 0. 5 million per day each year.

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IELTS academic The graph compares changes in the Oil Production Capacity in millions of barrels per day in six countries.

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