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The table below shows the number of visitors to and from the UK over a six-month period in 2008, and the amount of money they spent. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the number of visitors to and from the UK over a six-month period in 2008, and the amount of money they spent. YRRBj
The table illustrates the number of people travelling out of and visiting the UK and their spending from May to October in 2008. Overall, it can be seen that the UK residents visiting other countries far outnumbered inbound visitors, while both numbers decreased. Moreover, despite a steady decline, the UK travellers spent more than international visitors. As can be seen from the table, the outbound travellers were virtually double inbound visitors in numbers, with around 5. 7 millions and 2. 6 millions respectively. In addition, the number of UK residents travelling overseas dropped steadily from 5. 97 millions to 5. 25 millions. Similarly, the figure for international visitors to the UK fell continuously from 2. 81 millions to 2. 63 millions; meanwhile, it saw a slight rise in October. According to the table, there was an insignificant change in the spending of both inbound and outbound visitors. The expenditure of UK travellers fluctuated, spanning between the largest figure 3, 130 million pounds in May and the smallest one of 2, 780 million pounds in October. Furthermore, a similar yet less volatile pattern can be seen in the figure for international visitors to the UK, with the lowest was 1, 390 million pounds in August and to a peak of 1, 470 million pounds in October.
The table illustrates the
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of
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travelling out of and visiting the UK and their spending from May to October in 2008.

Overall
, it can be
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that the UK residents visiting other countries far outnumbered inbound
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visitors
, while both
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numbers
decreased.
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, despite a steady decline, the UK
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travellers
spent more than international visitors.

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seen
from the table, the outbound
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travellers
were
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double inbound
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visitors
in
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, with around 5. 7
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millions
and 2. 6
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millions
respectively
.
In addition
, the
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number
of UK residents travelling overseas dropped
steadily
from 5. 97
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millions
to 5. 25
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millions
.
Similarly
, the figure for international
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visitors
to the UK fell
continuously
from 2. 81
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millions
to 2. 63
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millions
; meanwhile, it
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saw
a slight rise in October.

According to the table, there was an insignificant
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change
in the spending of both inbound and outbound
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visitors
. The expenditure of UK
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travellers
fluctuated, spanning between the largest figure 3, 130
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million
pounds in May and the smallest one of 2, 780
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million
pounds in October.
Furthermore
, a similar
yet
less volatile pattern can be
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seen
in the figure for international
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visitors
to the UK, with the lowest was 1, 390
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million
pounds in August and to a peak of 1, 470
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million
pounds in October.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the number of visitors to and from the UK over a six-month period in 2008, and the amount of money they spent.

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