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As shown in the chart Diagram, there are there Computer packages have been downloaded last five weeks. three colors indicates for the packages, first is the Red then Purple and Blue. the maximum download recorded in the graph is 120 and minimal one is less than 25. Overall, we can see that the most Package Downloads in the whole weeks was ActiveX even through all others. lets make a comparison in the first week. that is clear ActiveX is highest one, then comes java then Net. and if we take a fast look at the chart we notice that this sequence is similar for all week in the graph NET is the least one, Java in the middle and ActiveX is the highest one. the most significant downloaded changes in the chart is NET. let's talk about it. At the first week it hits around 35 but at next week it decrease to mostly 30, then come back to increase again until the fifth week, meanwhile the other two packages was increasing in all weeks.

As shown in the chart Diagram, Adverb repetition. Please, verify.there areare there
there are there
 Computer You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxcontainerparcelpacketkitbag
packages
 have been downloaded
 last five weeks.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThree
three
 colors indicates for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxcontainerparcelpacketkitbag
packages
, first
 is the Red then Purple and Blue. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
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recorded


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in
 the graph is 120 and minimal one is less than 25.

Overall
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that the most You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxcontainerparcelpacketkitbag
Package
 Downloads in the whole You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
weeks
 was ActiveX even through all

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOthers
others
. Did you mean "let's" (let's = let us; lets = 3rd person singular of 'let')?let's
lets
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a comparison in the first
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week
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThat
that
 is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 ActiveX is A determiner is probably missing here: "the highest".the highest
highest
 one, then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approachesarrives
comes


java then Net. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAnd
and
 if we take a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
 look at the chart we notice that this sequence is similar Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphfor.for!for?for:for,for;
for


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAll
all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
week
 in the graph NET is the least one, Java in the middle and ActiveX is the highest one.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThe
the
 most significant downloaded This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in the chart is NET. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterLet
let
's talk about it.

At the first
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week
 it hits around 35 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 at next
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week
 it Did you mean "decreases"?decreases
decrease
 to mostly
 30, then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back to increase again

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterUntil
until
 the fifth You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
week
, meanwhile the other two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboxcontainerparcelpacketkitbag
packages
 was increasing in all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
weeks
. 