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The diagram shows a simplified version of the ordering process used by one company.

The diagram shows a simplified version of the ordering process used by one company. DVPAE
The diagram provides information about the ordering steps, which the process is a simple version, for using by a company. Overall, there are the variety of roads to get the end, which are three columns, as well as the main point of forward is answers from customers. Moreover, the situation is started with receiving an order. On the other hand, the first step is that does the order active consistently? Therefore, the path is separated two ways, and then if the answer is positive, the company must ensure to be quality for products. Additionally, if the currently situation continues, humans take a discount, but the answer is opposite, people go to other way from the process, that is related with first way. As mentioned earlier, if the first way is a negative statement, the process is forwarded related with second column by company’s rules. However, the second column is a positive reaction, customers go to receive a single answer, and then the process is met in a final column, which is called “order shipped and client charged”.
The diagram provides information about the ordering steps, which the
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process
is a simple version, for using by a
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company
.

Overall
, there are the variety of roads to
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get
the
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end
, which are three
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columns
,
as well
as the main point of forward is
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answers
from customers.
Moreover
, the situation is
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started
with receiving an order.

On the other hand
, the
first
step is that does the order active
consistently
?
Therefore
, the path
is separated
two ways, and then if the
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answer
is
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positive
, the
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company
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must
ensure to be quality for products.
Additionally
, if the
currently
situation continues, humans take a discount,
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but
the
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answer
is opposite,
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people
go to other way from the
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process
, that
is related
with
first
way.

As mentioned earlier, if the
first
way is a
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negative
statement, the
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process
is forwarded
related with second
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column
by
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company
’s
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rules
.
However
, the second
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column
is a
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positive
reaction, customers go to receive a single
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answer
, and then the
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process
is met
in a final
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column
, which
is called
“order shipped and client charged”.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows a simplified version of the ordering process used by one company.

Academic
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4 paragraphs
177 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
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