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The given chart represents percentages of four different types of recycled household waste in a city during 1992, 1997 and 2002. Overall, recycled waste kept rising in 10 years. In contrast, there was a collapse of cans between 1992 and 1997. In 1992, the percentages of recycled plastic, cans, paper and glass were below 20%. Thereinto, paper and glass were around 14% for recycling. The rate of cans was slightly higher (15%). Recycled plastics had the lowest percentage, approximately 10%. In 1997, there was a steadily ascending plastics (13%) and paper (19%). In five years, the increase of recycled glass rapidly reaching to 29%. Contrarily, only cans fell to 12%. Except plastic stayed constant at 13%, the remains all in an upward trend in 2002. Cans got to 20%; Paper almost achieved with 30%; Around 49% glass boomed. In conclusion, the bar chart illustrates the requirements of four types of recycled constantly growing every five years.
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recycled
household waste in a city during 1992, 1997 and 2002.

Overall
,
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recycled
waste
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kept
rising in 10 years.
In contrast
, there was a collapse of
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cans
between 1992 and 1997.

In 1992, the percentages of
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recycled
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plastic
,
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cans
, paper and
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glass
were below 20%.
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, paper and
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glass
were around 14% for recycling. The rate of
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cans
was
slightly
higher (15%).
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Recycled
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plastics
had the lowest percentage, approximately 10%.

In 1997, there was a
steadily
ascending
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plastics
(13%) and paper (19%). In five years, the increase of
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recycled
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glass
rapidly
reaching to 29%.
Contrarily
,
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only
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cans
fell to 12%. Except
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plastic
stayed constant at 13%, the remains all in an upward trend in 2002.
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Cans
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got
to 20%; Paper almost achieved with 30%; Around 49%
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glass
boomed.

In conclusion
, the bar chart illustrates the requirements of four types of
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recycled
constantly
growing every five years.
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IELTS academic recycled house hold waste

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5 paragraphs
156 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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