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The line graph tells us the information about how many visitors had visited the Caribbean island from 2010 till 2017. In general, we could see a continuous rise till 2016, and then this number has increased sharply after 2016. The trend of living on ab oat seems to become more popular over time. At first, there were 1 million visitors with a steady increase over the years and it reached 3. 5 million till 2017. Talking about the staying preferences of visitors, a few less than I million people chose to live on the island as compared to a boat. This figure is steady till 2011 after a rise of about more than half a million it again got stable till 2015. With a slight decrease in 2016, it again reached the previous number in 2017. However, boat residents were very few at the beginning which shows a slight increase in the first year, yet it goes back to the same number in the next year. Later on, there was a steady increasing trend to be seen by reaching the figure of 2 million in 2017.
The line graph
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us the information about how
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visitors had visited the Caribbean island
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from 2010 till 2017
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In general
, we could
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see
a continuous rise till 2016, and then this number has increased
sharply
after 2016. The trend of living on ab oat seems to become more popular over time.

At
first
, there were 1
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million
visitors with a steady increase over the years and it reached 3. 5
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million
till 2017.

Talking about the staying preferences of visitors, a few less than I
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million
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people
chose to
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live
on the island as compared to a boat. This figure is steady till 2011 after a rise of about more than half a
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million
it again
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got
stable till 2015. With a slight decrease in 2016, it again reached the previous number in 2017.

However
, boat residents were
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few at the beginning which
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shows
a slight increase in the
first
year,
yet
it goes back to the same number in the
next
year. Later on, there was a steady increasing trend to be
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by reaching the figure of 2
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million
in 2017.
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