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The table chart shows the information about the changes in modes of travel in thevEngland between 1985 and 2000 .

The table chart shows the information about the changes in modes of travel in thevEngland between 1985 and 2000. ABwGe
Initially, the majority of people preferred to travel by all modes of transport from 4750 miles in 1985 and this number increased significantly until 6745 miles in 2000. The second most familiar form of travel was car used recorded at 3199 miles in 1985. After fifteen years, the slight increase can be noticed in car accounted for 4806 miles. Average commuters used other types of transmit for covering distance around 450 miles in the period of 1985. Later 15 years, this digit rose by 585 miles. In contrast, travelers preferred to travel on foot until 255 miles in 1985 comparatively in 2000, which was 237 miles. Passengers of England was used local bus and train for commuting distance from 429 miles, 289 miles respectively in 1985 rather than in 2000, there were 274 miles, 366 miles respectively. The least popular modes of transportation were bicycle, local distance bus and taxi in the given period. Overall, it is noticeable that tha maximum people used various types of transmit for covering distance and the second most popular form of transport was car among masses in fifteen years.
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, the majority of
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preferred to travel by all modes of transport from
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4750 miles
in 1985 and this number increased
significantly
until
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6745 miles
in 2000. The second most familiar form of travel was car
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used
recorded at
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3199 miles
in 1985. After fifteen years, the slight increase can
be noticed
in car accounted for
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4806 miles
. Average commuters
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used
other types of transmit for covering
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distance
around
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450 miles
in the period of 1985. Later 15 years, this digit rose by
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585 miles
.

In contrast
, travelers preferred to travel on foot until
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255 miles
in 1985
comparatively
in 2000, which was
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237 miles
. Passengers of England was
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used
local bus and train for commuting
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distance
from
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429 miles
,
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289 miles
respectively
in 1985
rather
than in 2000, there were
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274 miles
,
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366 miles
respectively
. The least popular modes of transportation
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bicycle
, local
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distance
bus and taxi in the
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given
period.

Overall
, it is noticeable that
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maximum
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people
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used
various types of transmit for covering
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distance
and the second most popular form of transport was car among masses in fifteen years.
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IELTS academic The table chart shows the information about the changes in modes of travel in thevEngland between 1985 and 2000.

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