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Recycling household items

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The graph illustrates the recycling rate of household of three countries such as I'm, France and Germany in the years of 2005 to 2015. Overall, the three countries showed major differences but France household recycling rate decreased meanwhile UK and Germany increased significantly over the years. Comparing the data, the United Kingdom being in the first place on household recycling. In 2005, UK had least recycling rate with 35% and then it reached 40% in 2007 and it remained stable until 2009 before increasing to 50% after that recycling rate increased immensely with 60% in 2015. similarly Germany showed consistent increase from 20% in 2005 to almost 60% in 2015 In contrast France was the highest recycling household rates with 50% in 2005 unfortunately this number declined to approximately 30% in 2013 before increasing to 40% in 2005. More specifically in the year of 2015, the United Kingdom has the highest rate of recycling household followed by Germany
The graph illustrates the
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of
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household
of three countries such as I'm, France and Germany in the years of 2005 to 2015.
Overall
, the three countries
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showed
major differences
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but
France
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household
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recycling
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rate
decreased meanwhile UK and Germany increased
significantly
over the years. Comparing the data, the United Kingdom being in the
first
place on
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household
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recycling
. In 2005, UK had
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least
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with 35% and then it reached 40% in 2007 and it remained stable until 2009
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before
increasing to 50% after that
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increased
immensely
with 60% in 2015.
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similarly
Germany
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showed
consistent increase from 20% in 2005 to almost 60% in 2015
In contrast
France was the highest
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recycling
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household
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rates
with 50% in 2005 unfortunately this number declined to approximately 30% in 2013
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before
increasing to 40% in 2005. More
specifically
in the year of 2015, the United Kingdom has the highest
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recycling
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followed by
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Germany

IELTS academic Recycling household items

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
157 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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