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Future plan of University

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The two chart describes the future plan of University sports centre and how it's renovated from present structure. Overall, University sports centre added plenty of facilities in the west and east sides. More specifically, sports centre going to be bigger in the future renovation noticeably gym has been extended more and dance studio have been introduced in the east side of the layout furthermore main difference would be sports hall which is established newly in next to the seating area. They introduced changing rooms in corner of the both sides. especially there will be new shops such as sports Shop in left corner and cafe in the right side of the entrance. on the west side lesiure pool has been introduced along with pathway to the changing room which is in the left corner one similarity would be that 25 m pool and reception remains same in the future renovation project.
The two chart
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the future plan of University
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sports
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centre
and how it's renovated from present structure.

Overall
, University
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sports
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centre
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added
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plenty
of facilities in the west and east sides.

More
specifically
,
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sports
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centre
going to be bigger in the future renovation
noticeably
gym has
been extended
more and dance studio have
been introduced
in the east side of the layout
furthermore
main difference would be
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sports
hall which
is established
newly
in
next
to the seating area. They introduced changing rooms in corner of the both
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sides
.
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especially
there will be new shops such as
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sports
Shop in
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left
corner and
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cafe
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in the right side
of the entrance.
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on
the west side
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lesiure
pool has
been introduced
along with pathway to the changing room which is in the
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left
corner one similarity would be that 25 m pool and reception remains same in the future renovation project.
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IELTS academic Future plan of University

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3 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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