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the value of exports of kiwi fruits from New Zealand to five countries between 2010 and 2012

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The given table depicts the information about the exported value of kiwi from New Zealand to five distinctive countries in three consecutive years, starting from 2010. Overall, it is clear from the table that Japan, China, and Russia was experienced an upward trend over the given period; conversely, a significant fall was founded in both Mexico and Saudi Arabia. Beginning with outperforming number since 2010, Japan’s exported value was at around 271 million; likewise, the value which is the highest number increased dramatically up to roughly 325 million in the following two-year. Furthermore, another substantial rise was occupied by not only Japan but also China and Russia. Increasing over 20 million within two years, the second-highest value of the country in a given period was China, which reached its peak at 94 million in 2012. Moving on to downward trends, the spectacular fall was occupied by Mexico as well as Saudi Arabia. Nearly 3 million of Mexico’s imports was dropped between 2010 and 2012; also, Saudi Arabia faced this trend which declines to roughly 80 thousand at the end of the period.

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given
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value
 of kiwi from New Zealand to five distinctive countries in three consecutive years, starting from 2010.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the table that Japan, China, and Russia was experienced
 an upward trend over the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period; conversely
, a significant fall was founded
 in both Mexico and Saudi Arabia.

Beginning with outperforming number since 2010, Japan’s exported You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitpricerateamountcostexpense
value
 was at around 271 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
; likewise
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitpricerateamountcostexpense
value
 which is the highest number increased dramatically
 up to roughly 325 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 in the following two-year. Furthermore
, another substantial rise was occupied
 by not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 Japan This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 China and Russia. Increasing over 20 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 within two years, the second-highest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprofitpricerateamountcostexpense
value
 of the country in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 period was China, which reached its peak at 94 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 in 2012.

Moving on to downward trends, the spectacular fall was occupied
 by Mexico as well
 as Saudi Arabia. Nearly
 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
million
 of Mexico’s imports was dropped
 between 2010 and 2012; also
, Saudi Arabia faced this trend which declines to roughly 80 thousand at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period. 