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The causes of broken up in a relationship

The causes of broken up in a relationship Vr307
There is a proverb that says: “beauty is the eyes of the beholder”. So, when someone starts falling in love, they jump into a state of limbo that they feel love is perfect. Besides that, their partner in the first stage of a relationship, always appears gently and politely, which makes them believe they found the right person to love. In fact, after a long time being together, both show all of their demerit points such as bad behaviors, different lifestyles, disloyalty, then they break up with leads of disappointment and pain. Definitely, everybody always has personality flaws which they have to improve and eliminate day after day, but there are some problems about their behaviors that can not be modified because this is related to the natural syndrome. For example, if your partner is an OCD person, they always repeatedly have certain thoughts or feel necessary to frequently perform some routines like hand washing, counting things, and checking to see if a door is locked; contrary to you - stay calm when everything is the same as a mess and seems dirty. Honestly, actions that you don't like will automatically be considered as bad actions, so you and they certainly have fiery arguments in life. No matter how much you love them, it is hard to be together for a long time because of several huge differences, especially when you are fully disappointed about their bad behaviors. It was not by accident that any relationship also needs a suitable alliance, which means a couple should have the same lifestyle. Take an example for distance about social level, you can not demand the poor have table manners as princesses and understand royal rules, or even if they will be taught after that, their nobility of bearing is never similar to a prototype. Different lifestyles create barriers between you and your husband's family - a popular state with different regional marriages. I have seen a newlywed divorce after 3 days of living together because his family has a tradition that the daughter-in-law is forced to have meals in the kitchen. She said that she felt disrespect and mocked. Therefore, different norms are considered one of the main reasons leading to the break-up. The most striking feature of the causes of broken up is disloyalty, or in another word the appearance of a lover ruined relationships. Loving for a long time is an ineluctably boring feeling because in a long period relationship, they now fully grasp each other from their hobbies to emotions. In the meantime, the appearance of the lovers as a freshness filling all dark nook and cranny, bringing new experiences that makes you curious and interested. By means of spending more time with your new love, you seem to forget caring about your partner instead of constantly comparing your soulmate and your lover. Finally, everything collages with tears and hurt. In conclusion, people usually say that: “ Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a teardrop”. Don’t blame anyone for any reason leading to a relationship breakdown because in general, we break up when we do not love each other anymore. After we split up, there are so many sorrows and pains, but we have to be strong to continue to live and start a new life.
There is a proverb that says: “beauty is the eyes of the beholder”.
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So
, when someone
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starts
falling in
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love
, they jump into a state of limbo that they feel
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love
is perfect.
Besides
that, their partner in the
first
stage of a
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relationship
, always appears
gently
and
politely
, which
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makes
them believe they found the right person to
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love
. In fact, after a
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long
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time
being together, both
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show
all of their demerit points such as
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bad
behaviors,
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different
lifestyles, disloyalty, then they break up with leads of disappointment and pain.

Definitely, everybody always has personality flaws which they
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have to
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improve
and eliminate day after day,
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but
there are
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some
problems about their behaviors that can not
be modified
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because
this
is related
to the natural syndrome.
For example
, if your partner is an OCD person, they always
repeatedly
have certain thoughts or feel necessary to
frequently
perform
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some
routines like hand washing, counting things, and checking to
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see
if a door
is locked
; contrary to you
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-
stay calm when everything is the same as a mess and seems dirty.
Honestly
, actions that you don't like will
automatically
be considered
as
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bad
actions,
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so
you and they
certainly
have fiery arguments in life. No matter how much you
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love
them, it is
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hard
to be together for a
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long
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time
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because
of several huge differences,
especially
when you are
fully
disappointed about their
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bad
behaviors.

It was not by accident that any
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relationship
also
needs a suitable alliance, which means a couple should have the same lifestyle. Take an example for distance about social level, you can not demand the poor have table manners as princesses and understand royal
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
, or even if they will
be taught
after that, their nobility of bearing is never similar to a prototype.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Different
lifestyles create barriers between you and your husband's family
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
a popular state with
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different
regional marriages. I have
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seen
a newlywed divorce after 3 days of living together
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because
his family has a tradition that the daughter-in-law
is forced
to have meals in the kitchen. She said that she felt disrespect and mocked.
Therefore
,
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different
norms
are considered
one of the main reasons leading to the break-up.

The most striking feature of the causes of broken up is disloyalty, or in another word the appearance of a lover ruined
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relationships
. Loving for a
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long
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time
is an
ineluctably
boring feeling
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because
in a
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long
period
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relationship
, they
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now
fully
grasp each other from their hobbies to emotions. In the meantime, the appearance of the lovers as a freshness filling all dark nook and cranny, bringing new experiences that
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makes
you curious and interested. By means of spending more
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time
with your new
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love
, you seem to forget caring about your partner
instead
of
constantly
comparing your soulmate and your lover.
Finally
, everything collages with tears and hurt.

In conclusion
,
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people
usually
say that:
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“
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Love
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begins
with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a teardrop”. Don’t blame anyone for any reason leading to a
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relationship
breakdown
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because
in general
, we break up when we do not
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love
each other anymore. After we split up, there are
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so
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many
sorrows and pains,
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but
we
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have to
be strong to continue to
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live
and
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start
a new life.

IELTS academic The causes of broken up in a relationship

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