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The picture below shows the process of growing and making products from pineapple.

The picture below shows the process of growing and making products from pineapple. PLqXp

Contained in the diagram is data pertaining to the procedure of process create produce from pineapples. The gist of the infographic is that the process is a fairly complex one which commences with a little bit of pineapple and culminates with package and usage. The initial phase focuses on the growing process. the ideal temperature to grow pineapple is from 28oC to 30oC. The procedure commences with plant crop with rational distance of about 26cm. Following seven months, when pineapple is big enough so famer will be sprayed chemical onto the surface. After five months, The pineapple is weighed 2kg and tall 30cm. Produce pineapple is the focus of the later steps in the sequence. Once grow pineapple has been completed, the pineapple of all size move on to manufactory where it is recategorizing translate to a rinsing machine and depend on it size to have three different stages. for the small and middle size of pineapple, they will be cut the top of this fruit and peel skin. in the following, the small size is move into the extractor to produce juice, while simultaneously the middle size that is cut small pieces before packaging into can. With the large pineapple, It will be wash into the water and make cakes and then transferred to other destinations and usage.

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 of pineapple and culminates with package and usage.

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enough
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 chemical onto the surface. After five months, The pineapple is weighed
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2kg
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.

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cut
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in
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small
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 packaging into can. With the large pineapple, It will be wash into the water and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 cakes and then transferred to other destinations and usage. 